You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You eat at your college cafeteria everyday lunchtime. However, you think it needs some improvements.
Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter:
- Explain what you like about the cafeteria.
- Say what is wrong with it.
- Suggest how it could be improved.
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear …………….. ,
Sample Answer (188 Words, 10 Sentences, 8 Paragraphs, Band 9)
I have decided to write this letter to inform you with a few personal ideas I have about our college cafeteria.
It is personally felt that our college cafeteria offers exceptionally good foods, which always taste incredibly amazing. I appreciate the hard work of all the chefs and their attempt to feed the students who can sometimes be picky.
However, not only myself, but it seems that many of the students do not feel pleased about how expensive most of the foods are. All restaurants charge at least $15 for each lunch menu and this is considered a very high price compared to the restaurants outside the college.
It appears that students will soon make an inevitable choice to eat outside the campus due to their poor financial situation. As an individual who would love to continue eating fantastic food at our central eatery, I would like to suggest you to publish an article about this issue. I hope this will help the college restaurant owners become aware of how we think of their food price.
If you have any further questions about this, please let me know.
(Source: Written by Kay Lim )
(NB: Follow the above band 9 writing structure for getting good band score in IELTS Exam. This Sample answer can be followed as an example of a very good answer. However, please note that this is just one example out of many possible approaches.)